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I felt a lament in the air
and rain came pouring down.
Somewhere above our heads,
Nature's Spirit awakes.

She sees the ruined seas,
the parched and barren lands,
devastated forests
and polluted cities.

So she cries for the Earth,
renewing, cleansing tears,
a chance to heal the hurts
and amend carelessness.

But all they notice here
is one more rainy day
and, giving it no thoughts,
they go back on their way.

I felt a lament in the earth
Fire came pouring out…
And here's another one for my Nature series. The Druid's at work again. :D

Of course, I could keep on going after the last stanza... but I think it's more thought provoking this way... Well, it seems like it to me anyway. :p How many more chances do you think we have?

A penny for your thoughts?
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LeaWiggins Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2007
An evocative and thought-provoking poem! Thank you for sharing it!
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Elorine Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2007  Hobbyist
Thank you. :)
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LeaWiggins Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2007
My pleasure, and I love your tagline. Is it from the movie? I have yet to see Hope Floats.
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Elorine Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2007  Hobbyist
You're going to laugh, but what's a tagline? :aww:
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The-Fairywitch Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very touching:tears:
Great sad poem.
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Elorine Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2007  Hobbyist
Thank you. :)
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2dazed Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2007  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Perfect for the club. It should be the poetic motto.
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Elorine Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2007  Hobbyist
:nod:
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EarthHart Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful m'deer, simply beautiful :nod: :clap:

You should submit this to
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Elorine Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2007  Hobbyist
Thank you. :)

Thanks for the suggestion too. I checked the club out and sent a note to join. :)
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