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Unleashed
The fire flares in the abyss
Inferno spews all around us
Consuming… Renewing

Unleashed
The tide rushes over the land
And mud swallows all in its path
Ravaging… Reclaiming

Unleashed
The mountain rumbles overhead
Snow sweeps everything in its wake
Levelling… Restoring

Unleashed
The sky turns dark and menacing
The wind hammers and lightning bursts
Shattering… Recalling

Unleashed
The earth fractures under our feet
Tearing all down into rubbles
Damaging… Altering

Appeased
Nature cleanses and starts anew
Apocalypse has retreated
Dying… Awakening
There, i've finished it... Hmmm... It kept me up for 2 hours last night and i finished it while the kids napped this afternoon. Well, i finished it now actually, i needed some synonyms and i have no thesaurus at work. :lol:

Nature's balance at his worst... or something of the sort anyway. :XD:
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DevinRichard Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2006
This is cool! I luv your style!
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Elorine Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2006  Hobbyist
Thank you.
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arc-ician Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2006
Interesting. I like the pairs of words at the end of each stanza and the repetition of the word "Unleashed." I know I'm behind on my sparks, and I don't have a reason... mostly. I guess being away from your significant other, the only way to talk being the use of an instant messenger and the occasional phone conversation tend to take up all your time.

Oh... when are you going to start using your points? You've still got 7, ya' know...
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Elorine Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2006  Hobbyist
Nevermind... i finally found the old post again. I had forgotten which one we joked about that, so i just skimmed through all your comments backwards until i found it... Phewn that was quite a few to go through, lol! November 25th it was, hehe.

Now... I would redeem those points, but i just don't know which of my stuff you've read already. And if you've read them all and didn't leave a comment on them, i'm assuming that's because you had nothing to say about them; so i'm not sure it's fair to ask you to do that... Ah, me and my silly conscience! Hehe. :XD: Maybe if you get to do the same, i won't feel half as bad, lol (i can hand out points for free, even, then again, with all the stuff you've helped with already, i'd say you've earned some). :nod:

Alright, off to work i go. Bye for now.
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Elorine Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2006  Hobbyist
Eh... I wished we had instant messages 15 years ago... Neither of us even had a computer, lol. Then again, if we did, i guess i'd be doing the same thing... spend all my time talking to him on it. Had to settle for a half hour phone call once a week... spent most of each week expecting it too. I know how it goes. :aww: But i'm rambling now. :XD:

No worries, the sparks aren't going anywhere; you can do any of them anytime you feel like. There are more important things. ;)

Ah, yes my points... How exactly do i use them again? :D
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